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you, across from me
exercising your
'right' to be a stranger-
our personalities
& public transport are
on uneven terms, so
we start a game
of darts;
you throw me your eyes, only
to have them thrown back
it's called 'bullseye'
because this dance-
of near misses
& stolen glance
makes us guilty of
red in shared blushes
(& horns in my pants)
stranger, there will come a time
you arrest me-
for revoking
your 'right'
to remain strange
& your permit to
bulldoze my heart.
exercising your
'right' to be a stranger-
our personalities
& public transport are
on uneven terms, so
we start a game
of darts;
you throw me your eyes, only
to have them thrown back
it's called 'bullseye'
because this dance-
of near misses
& stolen glance
makes us guilty of
red in shared blushes
(& horns in my pants)
stranger, there will come a time
you arrest me-
for revoking
your 'right'
to remain strange
& your permit to
bulldoze my heart.
Literature
crystallophone
there is a punchcard sin
like a queen of spades smoldering in an alley.
Engine,
you hear how the gears churn,
singing faster than we did before
back when black magic dropped like a
pair of socks from the sky with supplies
taped to a note that said
(oh, look at you now)
'U.S.A.,
freedom.'
such a beautiful brain:
what
what girl
runs on gasoline?
have a gallon
or we can call it a balloon,
and a new pair of glasses
for your tapered eyes
(you peel the bark back on the logs,
darling,
but you're not sure what you see),
and life says,
either nail jello to a tree,
successfully,
or keep your
icicles hanging from the eaves,
ca
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ellipsis
she goes to sleep
clawing at her chest with pinpoint accuracy
for an emptiness she can’t describe,
but hates all the same. tomorrow
she will write a letter: “dear boy,
i always wanted to be somebody’s
flowery poem, but the verses carved in my arms
are riddled with ugly clichés. & you are why
i don’t sleep through the night. if
we were a language, i was the
subordinating conjunction, you were
the punctuation.
i remember you in staccato
conclusions, solemn absences
of goodbye”
Literature
I Call Him Compulsion
Three. Four. Five. I like five; it feels complete. Okay, one more time. Six
Seven. Done.
"How long does it take to get a glass of water?" my husband calls from the living room.
"Sorry, I'm coming." I resist the urge to rinse the glass a few more times. Cleanliness is not a factorit's the numbers. The completion. The habit. I take a sip of my water and force myself to stop asking if I should just run the water one more time.
I join Sam in the living room and sit in my usual spot: the center recliner. He always lies on the couch to watch TV. It works.
He hits the play button, and we watch ten minutes of reality before the demon
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Uncapitalised words and gross romance are intentional.
This poem was written during some intense eye intercourse with a perfect stranger on the bus. (By the time I had looked up from writing, she had gone.)
This poem was written during some intense eye intercourse with a perfect stranger on the bus. (By the time I had looked up from writing, she had gone.)
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Hey there!
Prettyflour her on behalf of with the critique you requested.
Wow, I just love the words in this poem- simple and direct and deep in meaning.
In terms of constructive criticism, I do question the structuring in the beginning of the poem. For me, the flow was…off. I found myself wishing that the structuring was a bit simpler. Having said that, I do think the structuring works well later on. And I love the way you ended it- it had great impact!
I hope this was helpful! Thanks and have a great night!
Prettyflour her on behalf of with the critique you requested.
Wow, I just love the words in this poem- simple and direct and deep in meaning.
In terms of constructive criticism, I do question the structuring in the beginning of the poem. For me, the flow was…off. I found myself wishing that the structuring was a bit simpler. Having said that, I do think the structuring works well later on. And I love the way you ended it- it had great impact!
I hope this was helpful! Thanks and have a great night!